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No Reprise
No reprise
My darkest hour
Dead just like
A faded flower
This big space
Has no clues
Retrace steps
Lost, I lose
Forbid thee
My mirror screams
I dissappear
In sunken dreams
My darkest hour
Dead just like
A faded flower
This big space
Has no clues
Retrace steps
Lost, I lose
Forbid thee
My mirror screams
I dissappear
In sunken dreams
Published 16th Dec 2024
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16th Dec 2024 10:08am
16th Dec 2024 10:49am
16th Dec 2024 11:50pm
I don't know how you do it. Depending on how you read this, it's dark or encouraging. Maybe it's just my fractured mind
17th Dec 2024 8:45am
Haha Willow, I'm the same when it comes to reading sometimes, that's the beauty of poetry that different readers have there own interpretations 🙃♥️
17th Dec 2024 4:29am
Brilliantly written, Pete. Dig this a lot, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
17th Dec 2024 8:46am
17th Dec 2024 8:35pm
Another A+ from your creative mind. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and love, Oral
17th Dec 2024 11:47pm
