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My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
More
Than a site sister
United
In more than pain
Surviving
Deluges of
Wind and rain
She rises
The imagery
Of her words
Dazzles
Transports
Momentarily
I am lifted
Her gift
Transcends
Time
Space
Reason
I am there
Invited
Into her journey
Traveling
Side by side
Arm in arm
Sister
And
Sister
Because
She
And her words
Are
Indispensable
Than a site sister
United
In more than pain
Surviving
Deluges of
Wind and rain
She rises
The imagery
Of her words
Dazzles
Transports
Momentarily
I am lifted
Her gift
Transcends
Time
Space
Reason
I am there
Invited
Into her journey
Traveling
Side by side
Arm in arm
Sister
And
Sister
Because
She
And her words
Are
Indispensable
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
For the living memorial comp.
Because it’s personal. And sisters aren’t always born of blood.
For the living memorial comp.
Because it’s personal. And sisters aren’t always born of blood.
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Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
15th Dec 2024 1:34pm
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15th Dec 2024 1:40pm
Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
15th Dec 2024 2:34pm
Debbie deserves this.One of the best poets out there. Great write.
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Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
15th Dec 2024 2:57pm
Yes, I agree! As with LDF, Debbie takes us on a journey, sometimes imaginary, yet visually astute. I can't properly put it into words but there's always a degree of realism about her work which often packs a punch & very relatable. 👊 🙏
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15th Dec 2024 3:15pm
Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
15th Dec 2024 3:34pm
Mary, you write about one of the sweetest people and her writing shows it. That is a friendship that is worth keeping.
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15th Dec 2024 3:49pm
Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
15th Dec 2024 11:48pm
Debbie is everything good in the world, and you did her right.
You are such a goddess of expression.
You are such a goddess of expression.
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16th Dec 2024 1:36pm
Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
16th Dec 2024 6:17am
Beautiful write, Mary. Such a lovely tribute to, Debbie. She's a gifted writer indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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16th Dec 2024 1:37pm
Re. My Not So Little Debbie (deliabear)
Someone get me a box of tissues.
Mary this was so beautiful, what you wrote about me.
I am absolutely so humbled.
And the wonderful comments.
You brightened my world by writing this. And thank you to all who commented.
I feel loved - and I think that was your intention 💜 ❤️
Forever sisters.
Mary this was so beautiful, what you wrote about me.
I am absolutely so humbled.
And the wonderful comments.
You brightened my world by writing this. And thank you to all who commented.
I feel loved - and I think that was your intention 💜 ❤️
Forever sisters.
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20th Dec 2024 10:41pm