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each day hurts
unfortunately,
i feel
just as
i look,
the sun
comes up,
hours pass
and then
the moon
waves,
another
morning
and things
haven't
changed,
my body
in pain,
i feel
it there
to greet
me each
new day.
i feel
just as
i look,
the sun
comes up,
hours pass
and then
the moon
waves,
another
morning
and things
haven't
changed,
my body
in pain,
i feel
it there
to greet
me each
new day.
Published 15th Dec 2024
Author's Note
when i wake up each morning in pain, i know i'm still breathing
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15th Dec 2024 2:56am
Powerful write, Jimmy. I think that your positive outlook, shows such inner strength. Godspeed, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
15th Dec 2024 3:08am
15th Dec 2024 6:01am
Dear J,
I’m sorry you’re experiencing such pain. Despite it you inspire and create beauty in all your poems. H🌷
I’m sorry you’re experiencing such pain. Despite it you inspire and create beauty in all your poems. H🌷
15th Dec 2024 12:34pm
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