deepundergroundpoetry.com
retracts
just in
the middle
of our
kiss, she
opens
her eyes,
realizing
i am not
the man
that she
has been
dreaming
of, she
retracts
from our
kiss,
from my
arms.
the middle
of our
kiss, she
opens
her eyes,
realizing
i am not
the man
that she
has been
dreaming
of, she
retracts
from our
kiss,
from my
arms.
Published Yesterday
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 0
comments 10
reads 52
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Yesterday 00:17am
Yesterday 00:28am
Yesterday 00:17am
Yesterday 00:29am
Yesterday 1:14am
Yesterday 5:13am
Yesterday 5:07am
Yesterday 5:13am
Today 00:54am
This write is so good because it hurts so bad!
For the narrator to realize he wasn't what she wanted... is one thing. But for her to realize that... UGH!
Great shit
For the narrator to realize he wasn't what she wanted... is one thing. But for her to realize that... UGH!
Great shit
Today 2:00am
