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Poetry, An Emotion
I like poetry, and i like its secrets
Creations and twists, that impress
And the manifest of the thoughts
Bared like the sun, easily expressed
I read the finest quills, the nobler
The thinker, and the mystical worder
And the true lover, who sheds his blood
With every word spilled, romanticized
I read the wordsmith and the weaker
And the mediocre and the "show-offs"
Like i eat every thing, in my plate
Like i don't spare; flesh and bone
Poetry, the music sieved into words
Lyrically voiced with the heart strings
When the brain fails to count the ways
Poetry then, comes to the scene to be seen
Vibrating with ev'ry tongue moving
With every turn, with every pitch
The rhyme that flows like a stream
The sweet and melodious leitmotiv
the cyclical pattern of tide and flow
Like the waves, swaying to and fro
And day and night, or take and give
An osmosis ambiance of Adam and Eve
like poetry that blows the mind
Squeezes the heart to make it thrill
The spontaneous effusion of emotion
The raw expression at first impression
We are not Shakespeare and Baudelaire
We are not Bronte, we are not Browning
We are poets up the level of humanity
The simple ones that seek broad globality
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Published 9th Dec 2024
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9th Dec 2024 12:39pm
I like poetry that truly "blows the mind" that beautifully impresses the heart! I like poetry that walks on its unique unpredictable path.. that follows its own print and wears its own scent.. I like poetry that awaringly and adeptly be nurtured on blooming wonder.. Absolutely, we are not Shakespeare or Baudelaire that's so good for us, I think, we are poets holding our very truth, impression, feel, lore, mood, heart and mind, legacy.. So beautiful what you have written! Your poetry speaks deeply to me.. an immense delight reading you.. God bless you.
9th Dec 2024 12:44pm
So eloquent and genuine your words sound MySmile, you own
such a deep insight and intricate observations at how things run,
deep or shallow, it seems your gifted mind can easily sieve the think
from the thin and the good from the bad....
immensely thankful for this refreshing feedback. Hamid with best
regards ever,
BTW. thanks even for the RL.add. very heartwarming.
such a deep insight and intricate observations at how things run,
deep or shallow, it seems your gifted mind can easily sieve the think
from the thin and the good from the bad....
immensely thankful for this refreshing feedback. Hamid with best
regards ever,
BTW. thanks even for the RL.add. very heartwarming.
9th Dec 2024 1:34pm
9th Dec 2024 2:22pm
Thanks heaps my friend ''Debbie''. the pleasure is mine.
Stay always safe and blessed.Hamid
Stay always safe and blessed.Hamid
9th Dec 2024 3:37pm
A beautiful and truthful poem--truth to power--great picture, too. Hugs and love, Oral
9th Dec 2024 6:11pm
Truth is what makes good faithful friends, genuine poetry and
heartwarming comments, as well.Much thanks Oral, my friend,
your constant feedback is always welcome,Hamid
heartwarming comments, as well.Much thanks Oral, my friend,
your constant feedback is always welcome,Hamid
10th Dec 2024 5:52pm
Thank you Naajir;my dear friend, i always value your warm feedback and your respected presence,an your
RL add, really heartwarming.Hamid best wishes
RL add, really heartwarming.Hamid best wishes
10th Dec 2024 10:44pm
Thank you Everavalon, my friend, we respect our readers, we strive
hard to give to give our best and make poetry a crossroad of beautiful words from different feelings and thoughts...Hamid best wishes..
Thanks again for the R.L add. its really a great honor.
hard to give to give our best and make poetry a crossroad of beautiful words from different feelings and thoughts...Hamid best wishes..
Thanks again for the R.L add. its really a great honor.
13th Dec 2024 11:36am
13th Dec 2024 3:21am
Well written. I could envision the rhapsody of the reader. Well done. I enjoyed my time reading this piece.
lisa777
lisa777
13th Dec 2024 11:38am
Thank You Lisa777, Your presence on my page is the most comforting feedback i may wish for.Always pleased.Hamid
14th Jan 2025 4:47pm
I may be more complex seeking a narrow globality but I get it. Good message and great style, thanks.
15th Jan 2025 11:29am
Thanx heaps My Friend Glaxian, much respect to you for being here
with nice comments showered on my humble soul. and poetry..
Hamid's best regards.
with nice comments showered on my humble soul. and poetry..
Hamid's best regards.
