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Breakup
Heartbreak
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Heartbreak
Heartbreak!
swept with remorse
last note, unspoken thoughts
a chasm much too wide to cross
plummet
Written by
slipalong
Published
6th Dec 2024
| Edited
7th Dec 2024
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Cinquain
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#breakup
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Re. Heartbreak
Ahavati
(Tams)
6th Dec 2024 7:34pm
Very mournful, Slip.
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Re: Re. Heartbreak
slipalong
7th Dec 2024 8:58am
Just an exercise in the poetry form, a quintain not attempted before
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Re. Heartbreak
Rew
6th Dec 2024 10:13pm
Should that be " too " instead of ' to ' ?
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Re: Re. Heartbreak
slipalong
7th Dec 2024 8:59am
Too right
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