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Lust

A moment in life
To love again
Only it�s gone

Written by Loverwhispering

Published 5th Dec 2024

#love #lust

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Re. Lust

12th Dec 2024 5:10am

Scrub the last line, then you're laughing, ok? 😊

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Re. Lust

13th Dec 2024 6:01pm

I am enjoying how the minimalism of your poem mirrors the subject matter; it is memorable.

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