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Cinder Trail
Tough as a chastity cast iron scinth...
The reaper, always the reaper.
"Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail."
Forget the cut deep in your flesh.
Face the night as it was a flash.
"Now you're walking alone on the cinder trail."
Shoot down your loose phantoms...
The king is dead and there's no other.
"Now we're walking alone on the cinder trail."
The reaper, always the reaper.
"Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail."
Forget the cut deep in your flesh.
Face the night as it was a flash.
"Now you're walking alone on the cinder trail."
Shoot down your loose phantoms...
The king is dead and there's no other.
"Now we're walking alone on the cinder trail."
Published 3rd Dec 2024
Author's Note
"Now you're walking alone on the cinder trail." is a verse from the poem "Searchin for death" Written by Vision_of_insanity. Thanks Keith for inspiring me. Hugs!
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3rd Dec 2024 12:40pm
Amazing. I'm glad you found inspiration in my last poem. Dark, heavy, evil. I don't wanna walk on that cinder trail, yikes!
You rock PAR. Awesome poem.
You rock PAR. Awesome poem.
3rd Dec 2024 1:14pm
3rd Dec 2024 2:27pm
hello dearest Par for now we walk together what happens later is unknown to us... this is deeply inspired I felt its chill great write 💕
3rd Dec 2024 3:08pm
It’s a mix of awe and connection, an electric realization that lingers, a chill that both warms the heart and opens the mind.
4th Dec 2024 5:14am
4th Dec 2024 10:44am
