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Bring me the All Fathers eye(s)
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Bring me the All Fathers eye(s)
Kiddo
Grammatically correct or not
These eyes gaze
over countless moons
Written by
Carpe_Noctem
Published
2nd Dec 2024
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Re. Bring me the All Fathers eye(s)
Grace
(IDryad)
3rd Dec 2024 6:01am
About 12 now? I am guessing.
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Re: Re. Bring me the All Fathers eye(s)
Carpe_Noctem
3rd Dec 2024 6:58am
Yeah Grace, they grow up so fast.
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