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I Never Knew (The Cocktail Poem)
Leaving the wife tucked up in bed
Googling sites, reviewers said
Want to party through the night
Anything goes, here's your invite
Masked beauties in leather n' lace
BLOODY MARY, I spotted a face
I gave her an add, my Insta page
We drank all night, danced on stage
Gazing at the TEQUILA SUNRISE
PINA COLADA, eyes were disguised
Beautiful, sexy, full of mystique
I got her a cab "I'll see ya next week"
Back home, an ANGEL FACE
A glass... mask, leather n' lace?
I crept into bed, I never knew
"Well darling... I like them too!"
Googling sites, reviewers said
Want to party through the night
Anything goes, here's your invite
Masked beauties in leather n' lace
BLOODY MARY, I spotted a face
I gave her an add, my Insta page
We drank all night, danced on stage
Gazing at the TEQUILA SUNRISE
PINA COLADA, eyes were disguised
Beautiful, sexy, full of mystique
I got her a cab "I'll see ya next week"
Back home, an ANGEL FACE
A glass... mask, leather n' lace?
I crept into bed, I never knew
"Well darling... I like them too!"
Published Yesterday
Author's Note
This is a follow-up to one I did the other month, whilst studying to become a nurse, I worked part-time at a cocktail bar and for those who don't know, they are the names of drinks in capital letters 🙃
Rupert Homes - Escape (The Pina Colada Song)
https://youtu.be/zROIlspgOjM?si=JdOJUCXYqvHcWEAI
Rupert Homes - Escape (The Pina Colada Song)
https://youtu.be/zROIlspgOjM?si=JdOJUCXYqvHcWEAI
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Yesterday 12:56pm
Cocktails are grateful drinks, aren't they? With their amazing names :-)
As you know I wrote many. Great piece, Pete, and epic song.
As you know I wrote many. Great piece, Pete, and epic song.
Yesterday 1:38pm
Yesterday 1:46pm
Dear P,
Clever write. I enjoyed how you created the story around them. Nicely done. H🌷
Clever write. I enjoyed how you created the story around them. Nicely done. H🌷
Yesterday 9:04pm
Anonymous
Yesterday 2:19pm
This went down smooth.
Enjoyable and fun.
Enjoyable and fun.
Yesterday 9:05pm
Yesterday 4:22pm
Yesterday 9:05pm
Yesterday 10:42pm
Today 10:12am
Today 1:51pm
Today 4:09am
Brilliantly written, Pete. I like the vibe of this write, it's fun and playful. Incorporating cocktails by name was a nice touch as well. Flawless execution, my friend. If I had an RL, it would be in the list. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Today 10:13am
