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Club Promotor

He arrived in a suit, hands clasped with the city's shadows.    
He knew the coke dealers, but it was the sadness in his soul that spoke loudest.    
Liquor and women with beauty to burn could never fill his void.    
So he chased solace in a place where he could sale marijuana legally,    
Red dirt calling him like a whispered promise.    
 
I think of him still, the silent wounds he hid beneath his skin,    
His aura was a seductive kind of ruin—    
Tantalizing, yet fractured beyond repair.    
"Leave Texas with its harlots," he said,    
"I’ll find peace in this scarlet earth."    
 
I wanted to keep him, my broken GI Joe doll,    
But he learned my secret before I had a chance to know him—    
Another night with a club promoter, long before I knew his name.    
He kicked me from his bed and vanished, trading me for the loneliness of Oklahoma’s sky.  
 
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Written by NP_NP
Published | Edited 7th Dec 2024
Author's Note
This poem is meant to capture the reader, to encapsulates the complexities of longing, heartbreak, and human imperfection.  The metaphor of the "broken GI Joe doll" is poignant, evoking fragility in a man who was a soldier. The club promotor is meant to capture: his allure and his pain, his desire for escape, and the quiet destruction he left in his wake.
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