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Secret Magic Sight
The stark ivory glisten is like
islands of broken diamonds.
Smashed sparkling beauty,
It became her retina's duty
To behold an acutely bright,
angelic ray of light.
She needed that sign.
That he was still there,
just beyond alive.
Or was it hazy sun drugged on peace?
The ambience of mixtures of light,
becomes our secret magic sight.
islands of broken diamonds.
Smashed sparkling beauty,
It became her retina's duty
To behold an acutely bright,
angelic ray of light.
She needed that sign.
That he was still there,
just beyond alive.
Or was it hazy sun drugged on peace?
The ambience of mixtures of light,
becomes our secret magic sight.
Published 30th Nov 2024
| Edited 2nd Dec 2024
Author's Note
Photo taken by Krista Verrastro.
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30th Nov 2024 8:37pm
30th Nov 2024 8:40pm
1st Dec 2024 3:59am
Beautifully written, Debbie. Into the list it belongs. Fantastic imagery. I concur with, Lilli. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
1st Dec 2024 2:39pm
1st Dec 2024 12:52pm
I can see how that photo inspired this write, the imagery is amazing.
"islands of broken diamonds" > this is so clever and spot on.
Amazing write, dear Debbie, as always actually...
"islands of broken diamonds" > this is so clever and spot on.
Amazing write, dear Debbie, as always actually...
1st Dec 2024 2:42pm
I was inspired by the photo and basically described what I saw. The glistening sun has
such brilliance on the surface of the water. Thank you for the nice comments.
such brilliance on the surface of the water. Thank you for the nice comments.
