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midnight breeze
the lifeless
candle
could not
show its
breath
on the
wall,
but the
night was
smooth even
without hope
or faith,
night words
left thoughts
in many
minds,
imagination
awake,
going like
a midnight
breeze.
candle
could not
show its
breath
on the
wall,
but the
night was
smooth even
without hope
or faith,
night words
left thoughts
in many
minds,
imagination
awake,
going like
a midnight
breeze.
Published 29th Nov 2024
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29th Nov 2024 5:37am
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2nd Dec 2024 4:10pm
I agree with Lil. My first feeling was...how pensive. I am taking time to read your work.
lisa777
lisa777
2nd Dec 2024 8:33pm
