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My "Ea" Series: Chapter III. The Great Music of Creation (continuation - 2)
(...)
The Ainur gathered in a choir,
each a master of a Sound,
some sang deeper, some did higher,
to the Choice of Music Bound.
For they uttered their Music,
the Symphony of Life in Colour.
they Filled the Void with Cubic
expressions of an inner Lore.
The Emptiness ceased to be devoid.
Now it was alive and emanating,
echoing fractals unveiling in Astroids,
Sacred Geometry Circles creating.
The Glory of their Song was Hailing
before Eru, their Father of the Form.
Never after was heard such a captivating
story to be told; yet, it's worth the waiting.
For in aeons, Second Music would be born.
There was the Ainur Melkor,
who was the mightiest in Elohim potential
among his kindred, yet his core
was lured to try a forbidden sequential.
He brought discord to the Piece of Art.
Lower in pitch, deeper yet a noise,
distorting with delays of seconds, a warp,
a vortex birthing diabolic choice.
"Zacheem ya zdhuu zvonkaa...", unnerved,
as a cave's reverberation, but of a drill,
it got prolonged, then brisk, then curved,
unrealistic, sad, or even equal to Eru's Will;
Confused in blasphemous infernal chaos,
seemingly Melkor's dualism balanced the shape.
The lesser deemed righteous his cause,
yet it was a mere lesson, lest a mortal grave.
For all would lead to the Creator,
the Father that Holds Forever the Flame;
all surveilled by the Immortal Reaper
of the Law so Strict ~ in the Hall of Pain.
Glorious souls fell shamelessly from the sky,
their birthright of life and choice did not endure
the trial of Mercy's initiation against the lie
of scenery's costumes, filled with mere lures.
Sad but true. Deus Ex Machina
comes at the End of Time to lift the decor.
"you reap what you sow" and nostalgia
is what's left when the Law opens its Door.
(...)
The Ainur gathered in a choir,
each a master of a Sound,
some sang deeper, some did higher,
to the Choice of Music Bound.
For they uttered their Music,
the Symphony of Life in Colour.
they Filled the Void with Cubic
expressions of an inner Lore.
The Emptiness ceased to be devoid.
Now it was alive and emanating,
echoing fractals unveiling in Astroids,
Sacred Geometry Circles creating.
The Glory of their Song was Hailing
before Eru, their Father of the Form.
Never after was heard such a captivating
story to be told; yet, it's worth the waiting.
For in aeons, Second Music would be born.
There was the Ainur Melkor,
who was the mightiest in Elohim potential
among his kindred, yet his core
was lured to try a forbidden sequential.
He brought discord to the Piece of Art.
Lower in pitch, deeper yet a noise,
distorting with delays of seconds, a warp,
a vortex birthing diabolic choice.
"Zacheem ya zdhuu zvonkaa...", unnerved,
as a cave's reverberation, but of a drill,
it got prolonged, then brisk, then curved,
unrealistic, sad, or even equal to Eru's Will;
Confused in blasphemous infernal chaos,
seemingly Melkor's dualism balanced the shape.
The lesser deemed righteous his cause,
yet it was a mere lesson, lest a mortal grave.
For all would lead to the Creator,
the Father that Holds Forever the Flame;
all surveilled by the Immortal Reaper
of the Law so Strict ~ in the Hall of Pain.
Glorious souls fell shamelessly from the sky,
their birthright of life and choice did not endure
the trial of Mercy's initiation against the lie
of scenery's costumes, filled with mere lures.
Sad but true. Deus Ex Machina
comes at the End of Time to lift the decor.
"you reap what you sow" and nostalgia
is what's left when the Law opens its Door.
(...)
Published 27th Nov 2024
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28th Nov 2024 9:30am
28th Nov 2024 10:22am
Thanks! Deus Ex Machina is a concept that definitely deserves more research and attention.
There was a children's comics book, Witch, where he, as God's aspect, intervened and somehow lifted the scenery, leaving behind a touch of being lost in the night and just , all coming to a change, an end, and for the first time I felt with my heart what the Apocalypse means, it is like the change, where at the end you remember the nostalgic days but they can never be returned. And since judgement is usually discussed, I wanted to emphasize on the irreversibleness of shifting sands.
BTW, the Oracle there really reminds me of a combination between Buddha and the Father (Sabaoth). And it is a really interesting combination, given that the Heart of Kandrakhar does look like the Cube of Metatron, it is really a legit story to me!
There was a children's comics book, Witch, where he, as God's aspect, intervened and somehow lifted the scenery, leaving behind a touch of being lost in the night and just , all coming to a change, an end, and for the first time I felt with my heart what the Apocalypse means, it is like the change, where at the end you remember the nostalgic days but they can never be returned. And since judgement is usually discussed, I wanted to emphasize on the irreversibleness of shifting sands.
BTW, the Oracle there really reminds me of a combination between Buddha and the Father (Sabaoth). And it is a really interesting combination, given that the Heart of Kandrakhar does look like the Cube of Metatron, it is really a legit story to me!
28th Nov 2024 10:27am
I always link mentally Deus Ex Machina with the arbitrary aspect of God and I like how, since this is a device used in theatre, it has an accent on how Truth is objective and judges in accordance with harmony, balance, perfection, sacred geometry and all for cosmical purposes, that feel super ghostly to the human perception, but also mysterious to experience.
28th Nov 2024 10:31am
Here I found the quote of the comics W.I.T.C.H:
https://2.bp.blogspot.com/1X8J2dR6aEH_Kt4_abCfLtLBwA5_ZvgOMtAIpB-lWT4OsKwSmnNLOsOQr9ja7rR5F8jDHpBim2-u07JHuxVmmzb8QsG-DHlJdGp9cIP-eRBMYS__OpSmK2XBwRspFA0GrRg6QeVjNQ=s0?rhlupa=MTE2LjEwNC44OS4xODU=&rnvuka=TW96aWxsYS81LjAgKFdpbmRvd3MgTlQgMS40OyBXT1c2NCkgQXBwbGVXZWJLaXQvMzI3LjcyIChLSFRNTCwgbGlrZSBHZWNrbykgQ2hyb21lLzM1LjAuOTEyMy4zNSBTYWZhcmkvMjIwLjM4
https://2.bp.blogspot.com/1X8J2dR6aEH_Kt4_abCfLtLBwA5_ZvgOMtAIpB-lWT4OsKwSmnNLOsOQr9ja7rR5F8jDHpBim2-u07JHuxVmmzb8QsG-DHlJdGp9cIP-eRBMYS__OpSmK2XBwRspFA0GrRg6QeVjNQ=s0?rhlupa=MTE2LjEwNC44OS4xODU=&rnvuka=TW96aWxsYS81LjAgKFdpbmRvd3MgTlQgMS40OyBXT1c2NCkgQXBwbGVXZWJLaXQvMzI3LjcyIChLSFRNTCwgbGlrZSBHZWNrbykgQ2hyb21lLzM1LjAuOTEyMy4zNSBTYWZhcmkvMjIwLjM4
28th Nov 2024 10:32am
Sorry for flooding you! This one is better:
https://2.bp.blogspot.com/DPojsm8tGpxSBmqKLQEYUXRqKMtNntpVz5_CCY44wZMchKUBSxKwav5kBSxGWOjofVzToN9SsyXD1AC4sKQv8sP_Je7dTV0moym3g6HyBmuZMDvLkNAIMpq2w26XRxcKahQ4Ju69ag=s0?rhlupa=MTE2LjEwNC44OS4xODU=&rnvuka=TW96aWxsYS81LjAgKFdpbmRvd3MgTlQgMS40OyBXT1c2NCkgQXBwbGVXZWJLaXQvMzI3LjcyIChLSFRNTCwgbGlrZSBHZWNrbykgQ2hyb21lLzM1LjAuOTEyMy4zNSBTYWZhcmkvMjIwLjM4
https://2.bp.blogspot.com/DPojsm8tGpxSBmqKLQEYUXRqKMtNntpVz5_CCY44wZMchKUBSxKwav5kBSxGWOjofVzToN9SsyXD1AC4sKQv8sP_Je7dTV0moym3g6HyBmuZMDvLkNAIMpq2w26XRxcKahQ4Ju69ag=s0?rhlupa=MTE2LjEwNC44OS4xODU=&rnvuka=TW96aWxsYS81LjAgKFdpbmRvd3MgTlQgMS40OyBXT1c2NCkgQXBwbGVXZWJLaXQvMzI3LjcyIChLSFRNTCwgbGlrZSBHZWNrbykgQ2hyb21lLzM1LjAuOTEyMy4zNSBTYWZhcmkvMjIwLjM4
29th Nov 2024 12:16pm
Hi, Boyana. Thanks for the link! I have no idea when I'll have time to get to it, but I will! xo
