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Trance of Tranquility
His eyes were Caribbean ocean,
in my heart explosions,
lapping at the vast shore of my soul's potion.
Lightning striking
A lustfulness spiking.
The soft foam of the warm ocean
took a sweet toll of commotion.
Mesmerized.
Hypnotized.
His eyes were a trance of tranquility.
With specs of sun shining ease.
Did I want or need you more?
Your hand on the handle of desire's door.
Inside was a yearn galore.
A sweet summon to intricately
and ever so intimately explore.
in my heart explosions,
lapping at the vast shore of my soul's potion.
Lightning striking
A lustfulness spiking.
The soft foam of the warm ocean
took a sweet toll of commotion.
Mesmerized.
Hypnotized.
His eyes were a trance of tranquility.
With specs of sun shining ease.
Did I want or need you more?
Your hand on the handle of desire's door.
Inside was a yearn galore.
A sweet summon to intricately
and ever so intimately explore.
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Re. Trance of Tranquiliyy
27th Nov 2024 2:49pm
I'm mesmerized & hypnotized with this poem. Well done. Beautifully packaged with a serene photo.
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Re: Re. Trance of Tranquiliyy
27th Nov 2024 2:51pm
Thank you for the spelling note. Misspelled words kill me. Lol
Thank you for the nice comments.
Thank you for the nice comments.
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28th Nov 2024 5:13am
Beautiful write, Debbie. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2024 5:50am
I hope you don't mind me using this vibe as a flotation device...
...a poetic carpet ride
Your pic suits the verbiage to a tee as well
Very lovely, Debbie
...a poetic carpet ride
Your pic suits the verbiage to a tee as well
Very lovely, Debbie
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28th Nov 2024 1:37pm
Wow that's really nice of you to say!
Glad you were transported.
Thank you so much! Happy Thanksgiving!
Glad you were transported.
Thank you so much! Happy Thanksgiving!
Re. Trance of Tranquility
28th Nov 2024 11:52am
You don't write erotica much, but when you do it's pretty damn brilliant.
Love the Carribean vibe of this one. Sultry piece, dear poetess 💕
Love the Carribean vibe of this one. Sultry piece, dear poetess 💕
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28th Nov 2024 1:40pm
Hi. Guess I was in a sultry mood.
I'm only able to write erotica putting a lot of imagination
into it. It's not my strong suit, but I'm glad you liked it
Thank you for such a nice compliment
Happy Thanksgiving!
I'm only able to write erotica putting a lot of imagination
into it. It's not my strong suit, but I'm glad you liked it
Thank you for such a nice compliment
Happy Thanksgiving!