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marooned

without you,
i feel
like a
ship that
has been
marooned
on a
lonely island.

Written by goodwolf1966

(jimmy)

Published 23rd Nov 2024

#disappointment #emptiness #heartbroken #loneliness #sadness

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Re. marooned

23rd Nov 2024 8:58am

Oh� this aches�

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23rd Nov 2024 11:35am

thank you Lil

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Re. marooned

24th Nov 2024 2:49am

Powerful write, Jimmy. Appreciate you.

DL

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24th Nov 2024 9:49am

thank you Damian

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Re. marooned

25th Nov 2024 4:49am

Powerful and sad
Awesome job

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25th Nov 2024 4:54am

thank you AfterSexDilemma for the comments and RL add.

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