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Loose Ends

Loose ends tie up knots inside.  
I'm not seeing past the loophole.  
Weaving through is seamless fabrication.  
Tightened design, anxiety.  
 
Tug of war balances, both sides pulling.  
Opposites repel.  
Collapsing attraction.  
The rope ends as I enter.  
 
Combative hang up.  
The fight to push ahead.  
Clashing dendrites become waves.  
Osmosis waters neurological branches.  
 
Electric quarks.  
Emotional, covalent bond.  
Cataclysmic dimension.  
The currents rapidly transpire.  
 
Anchor drops in tide.  
Celestial seas enquire.  
Magnetic abstraction.  
Volume dwells.  
 
Fluid gravity back and forth.  
Subatomic oblivion.  
Sail with me.  
Upon the bend, our curvature brightens.  
 
Vertical and horizontal vantage.  
'Neath the stars.  
Kinetic mimesis, between sun and moon.  
Ionic temperance exchanges plurality.  
 
Singularity turned duality.  
My conscience flows.  
From dust to infinite love.  
Left Yoke harnessed, right plowed gardens.
Written by Connotation
Published | Edited 26th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Just a little experimental "gauging" of various points of view.  In that, I try to capture the unity and harmony of finding purpose in a relationship in life. Found in the poem, the protagonist altogether lets everything in meaning go for the relationship. "Subatomic oblivion. Sail with me." I guess I didn't really build up a love poem, so much as summarize the reasons why someone should pursue love as a plan and purpose in their life, and perhaps, truth and absolution.
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