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My Opposite
Every thing I wish
Turns to its opposite
I want the world to explode
Why hasnt it?
The person I am
Is the opposite of the one I show
Why do I act this way
I just dont know
My friends like my opposite
But I dispies her
I want to scream out
And fucking kill her
This is a joke
A frickin nightmare
I want to go and hide
In a dark calm lare
I want to shoot myself
But my opposite stops me
I want to cut myself
and just let it bleed
I want to stop my heart
It only brings me pain
Get out of my fucking way
I need to get the vain
So one more time
And one last song
I hit the last verse
And now I am gone
Turns to its opposite
I want the world to explode
Why hasnt it?
The person I am
Is the opposite of the one I show
Why do I act this way
I just dont know
My friends like my opposite
But I dispies her
I want to scream out
And fucking kill her
This is a joke
A frickin nightmare
I want to go and hide
In a dark calm lare
I want to shoot myself
But my opposite stops me
I want to cut myself
and just let it bleed
I want to stop my heart
It only brings me pain
Get out of my fucking way
I need to get the vain
So one more time
And one last song
I hit the last verse
And now I am gone
Published 20th May 2012
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14th Jun 2012 10:35pm
very emotional piece...i liked reading it...i thought it was very well written but there were a few spelling errors....also...it was very relatable so good job! :)
12th Jul 2012 1:34pm
I can't say I know what you're feeling, but parts of this poem really catch my and makes me feel that I'm not alone in my thinking process. Overall, this is a very well put together poem and a great read in my oppinion. :)
21st Oct 2012 10:58pm
31st Aug 2013 4:08pm
Very good. You captured well the conflict many of us feel within ourselves.
