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Gentle Thunderstorms Within
There is a soothing storm within.
Gently, thunder booms from my heart.
Gentle heartbeats make emotional waves
and I cannot stop my feelings for her.
There is a teary deluge within.
My tears, the wine of my loneliness,
which intoxicates me until I’m love-struck
and then I am inebriated with the red wine of love.
The cloudburst in the sky of my crimson eyes,
the drunkenness of being wanted,
the overwhelming desire to be loved,
as for the arctic reality, my heart thunders on.
Gently, thunder booms from my heart.
Gentle heartbeats make emotional waves
and I cannot stop my feelings for her.
There is a teary deluge within.
My tears, the wine of my loneliness,
which intoxicates me until I’m love-struck
and then I am inebriated with the red wine of love.
The cloudburst in the sky of my crimson eyes,
the drunkenness of being wanted,
the overwhelming desire to be loved,
as for the arctic reality, my heart thunders on.
Published 17th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Don’t write much heartbreak poems anymore. They are mostly mental health poems now. I’m shaking up the themes I will be writing from now on.
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17th Nov 2024 5:19pm
17th Nov 2024 5:24pm
Thank you 🙏 and thank you for the thought yesterday. I kept writing throughout the day and it calmed me considerably. How are you??
17th Nov 2024 5:29pm
I'm doing much better Daniel I had no choice but to go back on my meds between the delusions and mood swings it was unbearable I feel good now... I agree with writing it does help and I'm glad you feel better ❤️
17th Nov 2024 10:59pm
