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Our Doyley Freud (Oi, Oi, Oi Redone)

Our Doyley Freud was voyeur coin.
This royal Noid embroidered groin.
 
Enjoying foil destroys with cloy.
The hoisted loins are poisoned poise.
 
Flamboyance ploys as voices roil.
Employing noise devoid of choice.
 
Some 'roids had boys exploiting points.
Recoiling droids conjoin if toil.

Deployment Troy ahoy will oink.
To loiter goyle annoyance doinks.
 
Appointing Lloyd lest Poy for choy.
From moistened soil is Soylent soy.
 
A Neumann boils in toying Hoyle.
Avoidance coy when ointment spoils.
 
Anointing oil needs voyage joy.
Rejoin your Deutch and corduroy.
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Author's Note
This is a remake of the poem I first posted as "Oi, Oi, Oi" a while back.  I think this version is way more definitive in direction, and is just overall better, way better than the original.  Believe me - it was challenging using the given format combined with the vocabulary.  It really challenged me to rhyme and make sense at the same time.  Idk if many people will get it, but there is meaning in this.
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