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Obscure
The joker’s always grinning
He’s grinning at your pain
Negative vibes are spinning
Taking root inside your brain
A wicked sin turns violent
When it’s got nothing pure
Cold stare remaining silent
Preferring to remain obscure
Copyright Damian DeadLove 2024
He’s grinning at your pain
Negative vibes are spinning
Taking root inside your brain
A wicked sin turns violent
When it’s got nothing pure
Cold stare remaining silent
Preferring to remain obscure
Copyright Damian DeadLove 2024
Published 14th Nov 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. I haven't written like this in many summers. Pete_25 is the master of this short punchy style, in my opinion. He inspired me to try this again tonight. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
"Have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight?"
- Joker (Jack Nicholson)
- Damian DeadLove
"Have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight?"
- Joker (Jack Nicholson)
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14th Nov 2024 7:22am
15th Nov 2024 4:31am
14th Nov 2024 9:51am
15th Nov 2024 4:36am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. You're welcome, brother. I had to know if I still could write that way. But seriously, brother, I dig the punchy writing style you've created. Appreciate you.
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14th Nov 2024 10:52am
Love it! Classic villain. Having Jack portray this character was priceless! Great job.
15th Nov 2024 4:39am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I agree, I loved his portrayal of Joker. Glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
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14th Nov 2024 11:17am
15th Nov 2024 4:41am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2024 3:43pm
Good one Damian. Your choice of words fit perfectly.
15th Nov 2024 4:42am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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14th Nov 2024 4:43pm
A wicked sin turns violent
When it’s got nothing pure
I felt that one. This was pretty punchy, Damian!
When it’s got nothing pure
I felt that one. This was pretty punchy, Damian!
15th Nov 2024 4:43am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. I liked those lines as well. Appreciate you.
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15th Nov 2024 7:13am
The presence of the Joker has always been a referendum on the human condition.
as is excellently displayed here.
Much respect
Naaj
as is excellently displayed here.
Much respect
Naaj
15th Nov 2024 10:21pm
You nailed both the message & the style with this rhythmic, punchy piece!
16th Nov 2024 8:33am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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16th Nov 2024 11:30am
It's an amazing thing how we inspire each other here. Pete is indeed a master at a short punchy style, but you're pretty damn good at it too. You nailed it imo with an epic idea and piece.
16th Nov 2024 10:44pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Yeah, we all inspire each other, for sure. I'm glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
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