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Idles
Whispers of seasons in shadows of wind
souls dance beneath lanterns of stars
known only to the heart on a canvas
brushing against the blushing skin
fiddling until nature idles
souls dance beneath lanterns of stars
known only to the heart on a canvas
brushing against the blushing skin
fiddling until nature idles
Published 11th Nov 2024
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11th Nov 2024 1:48pm
Good job of capturing the concept of consciousness in this analogy. It breathes life into the creative process of artistry, at least to me. It may seem as though we're pulled away in distraction by the atmospheric aesthetic of general awareness. away from the busy activity of the mind. I suppose it can also be vice versa, in coming out of being "idle" in existing in nature, to the busy activity of mind. Overall, a great job of sharing such perspective. It has depth to me. That's just some of what I interpret. Thanks for sharing!
11th Nov 2024 1:55pm
