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No promises
Just don't promise me forever.
Or say that you'd never.
Or even that you won't,
you don't, or ever, before.
Just stay right beside me.
Or follow or guide me.
Act like you like me.
Be the one I look for.
A.R.M.
Published 11th Nov 2024
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13th Nov 2024 12:28pm
Actions stronger than words. Your poem is on point.
Hope the DUP "therapy" is going well.
Hope the DUP "therapy" is going well.
13th Nov 2024 12:31pm
I like this, because of the awareness of struggles in relationships. It's easy to fail, and your expectations in this offer an almost safety zone, even if they sound doubtful. Good way to use a sense of irony. It's like instead of building someone up to be perfect, you expect them to be human, and to share in the sacrifice of struggle that it takes to be honest in a relationship. Good write. Though succinct, I think it packs a punch. In my reading list it goes.
