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What can I do if fall off the edge of the builting
What can't I breath? Please tell me why
Why I felt push to the edge of the world .
Maybe I stand to close to you
Someone maybe can see me falling.
Can they see me dying from the sky please before I. Die again well then their a people lying on the sidewalk.I wonder what others say about my life or death it's okay to wonder. I wonder for my death is
It to late it's here. It's to late for me say bye to all
It's to late for him or me we need help the to get up an realize we can. We can make it work an see the world. On time just in time okay nobody but us I see now okay.
What can't I breath? Please tell me why
Why I felt push to the edge of the world .
Maybe I stand to close to you
Someone maybe can see me falling.
Can they see me dying from the sky please before I. Die again well then their a people lying on the sidewalk.I wonder what others say about my life or death it's okay to wonder. I wonder for my death is
It to late it's here. It's to late for me say bye to all
It's to late for him or me we need help the to get up an realize we can. We can make it work an see the world. On time just in time okay nobody but us I see now okay.
Published 19th May 2012
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21st May 2012 5:46am
dont use periods...use stanzas
EX:
roses are red
violets are blue
NOT:
roses are red.violets are blue
EX:
roses are red
violets are blue
NOT:
roses are red.violets are blue
21st May 2012 7:09am
