Constant Dispute

To the point and the poem has a lot of feeling. Also the poem is making me think of what may explode after election day. Nice work.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. It could be interesting. Appreciate you.

DL

There's so much power in those four lines. And so much truth - seems the world gets more chaotic as time goes by. Thanks for sharing your wisdom, I appreciate you.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. I'm glad you liked it. It is scary out there. Appreciate you.

DL

Tight 4 liner Damian and yes so so true, beneath the surface! ❤️

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Where secrets hide.. Appreciate you.

DL

Really resonated with me. Well written.
Great job!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. I'm glad you liked it. Appreciate you.

DL

Spoken words of wisdom and truth 💪👍✍️🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Much respect. Appreciate you.

DL

I appreciate your thoughts and prayers 😇🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

So many facets to such a short piece. Brilliant!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you liked it. Appreciate you.

DL

Dear DL,

There’s an energy in this that’s got a very slow build but it’s chaotic once it ignites. It makes me think of That frustration that takes hold when we let thoughts get too large. I really appreciated this piece for its thoughtfulness. H🌷

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. I'm glad you enjoyed the write. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

DL  

The birth of spiritual myopia.  Slaves to miserable provocation in pride, we lose control.  An internal dialogue of ignorance, contempt, doubt, distrust, and abandonment, left to question uncertainty in purpose.  Stabbing in the dark without an answer or truth is quite the lonely disposition, and this seems to capture that well, at least for me.  Alternate discernment from establishment, perhaps unknown seemingly, to the crippling emotion of conflicted judgment, making a dark mistake, in the plurality of human pursuit.  Reat good job of capturing the frustration of relationships lacking a common goal and source of obedience/citation of resource.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Always dig your analysis, and thoughts on the write. Much respect. Appreciate you.

DL  

I love your writings, because they're neat, tidy, and pack a condensed punch.  That, in turn, inspires me to think a bit, and whatever interpretation that comes from me is an attempt to define, from my perspective.  You have a clean presentation but get deep points across.

A SOLID yes.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. Honored to make your RL. Glad you agree. Appreciate you.

DL