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floats
her voice
easily
floats
over the
ocean,
and as i
lost sight
of her,
our talk
disappeared,
i felt
as empty
like
someone
with no
secrets,
no hopes
or wishes,
watching
everything
sail away.
easily
floats
over the
ocean,
and as i
lost sight
of her,
our talk
disappeared,
i felt
as empty
like
someone
with no
secrets,
no hopes
or wishes,
watching
everything
sail away.
Published 1st Nov 2024
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1st Nov 2024 3:54am
Brilliantly written, Jimmy. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
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1st Nov 2024 4:00am
