Why?

I agree with you...acceptance is very important....once we accept that things can't be altered or we have to go through the trials n tribulations , it makes life easier ...
Thank you for your wonderful insight, dear poet. Very much appreciate it ❤️

I honestly don't think you need that final couplet, Dreams. The ellipses after 'A silent scream. . .' would be much more profound and allow the reader to draw their own conclusions based on their personal experience. I say this because at some point in our lives we have all been at the point of drowning in the deep water of our own sorrow. Yet some of us never ask, 'Why. . .'

The imagery in this is fabulous. I see an ocean in your eyes . . .thick like fog damping your sight. . .

All fabulous and the emotional impact is palpable as it is relatable.

Thank you so much ,dear Tams for your time and your elaborate review❤️

I used the final couplet because I often ask the universe 'why'....

But I have used the word as the title of my poem so may be I can omit the last verse...I'll think about it...it's 3am , I'm gonna sleep now...will edit it afterwards...thanks a lot ,dear poetess for your kind suggestion 🌹

Felt this Dear ❤️

❤️

sometimes these emotions can overwhelm someone, they have to come out somehow.

Yes...
Thank you ,dear Jimmy for stopping by n contributing your thoughts on this 🌹

Brilliantly written, Dreamz. Phenomenal writing. Appreciate you.

DL  

Thanks a bunch for your support ,dear Damian 🌹

This truly resonated, poetess. So glad you’re posting.

Thank you ,dear M
*Hugs*

Right back at ya💕

This is as vivid as it is cutting.
Clear striking emotion.
Regards James

Thanks for the great comment ,dear James 😊

"Scarlet scarring your skies". Beautiful line. The brilliancy of your style is excellent. Your poems are always good to read.