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Moon's dream
I don't know
what the moon dreams of
But whatever it is
It must be bewitchingly beautiful
And you...
you my dear,
are a dream of moon...
Author's Note
Through a man's lens...admiring his crush
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Re. Moon's dream
19th Oct 2024 5:39pm
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Re: Re. Moon's dream
19th Oct 2024 5:46pm
Thanks a lot for your great review. Your words mean a lot to me. Thanks for your gracious presence ,dear poet 🌹
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Re. Moon's dream
19th Oct 2024 9:41pm
I really enjoyed that you stepped out of your shoes to write from a different perspective!
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Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 3:14am
Re: Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 8:57am
Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 3:18am
Dear ID,
This piece was so moonbeam dreamy. Writing from the pov of the opposite sex gives an extra spin on it that is very intriguing. Lovely lunar write. H🌷
This piece was so moonbeam dreamy. Writing from the pov of the opposite sex gives an extra spin on it that is very intriguing. Lovely lunar write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 8:58am
Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 9:06am
I took some pictures of the moon the other day. It was so big and bright. Always reminds me of how small yet special we are.
Wonderful poem, friend 😁
Wonderful poem, friend 😁
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Re: Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 10:30am
Wow! You should someday post the pictures.
True.
Thanks a lot ,dear friend for the RL add ...❤️
True.
Thanks a lot ,dear friend for the RL add ...❤️
Re. Moon's dream
20th Oct 2024 11:19pm
Re. Moon's dream
16th Feb 2025 8:10pm
That's... really lovely. It's funny, I've never really thought about what the moon dreams of. It's such a solitary thing up there, isn't it? Makes you wonder if it's lonely, or if it's just content in its own quiet, beautiful way.
And then... the bit about being a dream of the moon... that's... well, that's something else. It's a bit overwhelming, in a good way. It's a really unique way of putting it, and it definitely makes you think. Thank you.
And then... the bit about being a dream of the moon... that's... well, that's something else. It's a bit overwhelming, in a good way. It's a really unique way of putting it, and it definitely makes you think. Thank you.
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Re: Re. Moon's dream
17th Feb 2025 9:50pm
Yes, we really don't know if the moon is content being alone or yearns for a companionship...
I love your comment....thanks a lot ,dear poet ❤️
I'm really honoured by the reading list add 🌹
I love your comment....thanks a lot ,dear poet ❤️
I'm really honoured by the reading list add 🌹