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Unspoken
The desire in her eyes is clear,
Unspoken, but loud enough to hear.
Her gaze holds me, burning bright,
As we surrender to the night.
No words needed, just a touch,
Our bodies know this truth too much.
In her, I’m lost,
In her, I’m found—
Bound together,
Without a sound.
Unspoken, but loud enough to hear.
Her gaze holds me, burning bright,
As we surrender to the night.
No words needed, just a touch,
Our bodies know this truth too much.
In her, I’m lost,
In her, I’m found—
Bound together,
Without a sound.
Published 18th Oct 2024
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18th Oct 2024 7:06pm
I love how you switched up the rhyme in the second stanza.
And this:
“ In her, I’m lost,
In her, I’m found”
Swoon…..
You blended erotica and romanticism well, friend.
And this:
“ In her, I’m lost,
In her, I’m found”
Swoon…..
You blended erotica and romanticism well, friend.
