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Ludwig

 
Ludwig feelings emerge
the double helix entwines
turns and utters love with music...internally
so no one else hears I whisper silently
caressing your darkness where it hurts
vulnerability incarnate you encompass everything

infinite and finite

I utter I love you
a ripple in time
we as a whole have hurt you
caressing I will balm

withdrawing only in your chord
so you will know me in every facet you create
striking the light with perfection for the imperfect

showing me a brand new side of my honesty
that hasn't been revealed yet

your artistry, your patience with me
a woman in hope alone
growing slowly so not to think too highly of my own regard
and completely miss the points you are making

I love you compassionately I pray
I gain understanding




Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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