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Re. Inhaled Expectations
Anonymous
16th Oct 2024 7:51am
Sounds like some deep diving...
I likes
I likes

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Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 4:02pm
Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 9:18am
I really dislike senryu and haiku style poetry. This is an exception. Well done for overcoming my strong prejudice on the matter.
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Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 4:03pm
haiku doesn't always work . But when it does it hits you right between the eyes
Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 10:45am
Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 12:04pm
Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 4:06pm
that sums my favourite favourite thing....
if given the cance would do it all night long
if still breathing ....
if given the cance would do it all night long
if still breathing ....
Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
16th Oct 2024 4:15pm
Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
18th Oct 2024 7:06am
I feel exactly the same way. My wife thinks I'm weird, but she is sure appreciative of my "weirdness". It is nice to know that a fellow poet shares my weirdness because I will take weird and happy over normal and miserable every time.
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Re: Re. Inhaled Expectations
18th Oct 2024 8:25am
normal is a majority perspective
me I'm always been in the minority
my perspective has always been a little weird
me I'm always been in the minority
my perspective has always been a little weird