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Dark
Don't even try to hide it.
The dark knows your fear.
Quite intimately my dear.
Upon the ghastly path to terror's pit.
Into the heart of horror,
the darkness will steer.
Your circuits to a safe reality blown.
Reality is really darkness's shadow.
Take you worst chilling fear,
and worsen it.
A beast in a maniac fit.
Not human or animal,
But a demonic bull.
The unfed dark hungers
with agony's ache.
A bloody beating heart
would surely satiate.
How about yours?
The dark knows your fear.
Quite intimately my dear.
Upon the ghastly path to terror's pit.
Into the heart of horror,
the darkness will steer.
Your circuits to a safe reality blown.
Reality is really darkness's shadow.
Take you worst chilling fear,
and worsen it.
A beast in a maniac fit.
Not human or animal,
But a demonic bull.
The unfed dark hungers
with agony's ache.
A bloody beating heart
would surely satiate.
How about yours?
Author's Note
Not my typical style, but it's October!
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Re. Dark
3rd Oct 2024 11:08am
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3rd Oct 2024 11:09am
Happy October. Love this dark poem and I'll be the 1st to congratulate you in getting an RL award. This is magnificent!
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3rd Oct 2024 11:14am
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3rd Oct 2024 11:21am
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3rd Oct 2024 1:20pm
Horror isn't my usual style either, but it's nice to dabble in it once every while.
I love this piece, it has everything: horror, demonic and (my favorite) a bloody beating heart.
Well done, dear B 😈
I love this piece, it has everything: horror, demonic and (my favorite) a bloody beating heart.
Well done, dear B 😈
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3rd Oct 2024 1:42pm
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3rd Oct 2024 5:43pm
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2024 4:12pm
Holy cripey!!!
Giiiiirl.
I hate Halloween but I love reading creepy poems.
Giiiiirl.
I hate Halloween but I love reading creepy poems.
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3rd Oct 2024 5:42pm
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'' Reality is really darkness's shadow. ''
Bars!!!
Thia mood swing you delivered is heavy...and I'm here for it!!
Bars!!!
Thia mood swing you delivered is heavy...and I'm here for it!!
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3rd Oct 2024 6:50pm
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
3rd Oct 2024 7:38pm
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3rd Oct 2024 7:41pm
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4th Oct 2024 9:38am
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8th Oct 2024 2:27am
That's pretty dark actually, Debbie & not so pretty! I wouldn't want you to go any darker... until the next time, at least. 😉
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8th Oct 2024 2:40am