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Depression
Her body wrapped in darkness,
trying to migrate to the light.
Such a frail little body,
still trying to fight.
Shattered into pieces,
trying to tether what's left.
Bounded by the ropes of insanity,
screaming, "life was never fair!"
Whispering echos
passed through the trees
Located in the forest of despair
begging the spirits for leniency
As they all
just vacantly stare
trying to migrate to the light.
Such a frail little body,
still trying to fight.
Shattered into pieces,
trying to tether what's left.
Bounded by the ropes of insanity,
screaming, "life was never fair!"
Whispering echos
passed through the trees
Located in the forest of despair
begging the spirits for leniency
As they all
just vacantly stare
Published 1st Oct 2024
Author's Note
Going through a lot mentally not knowing which way is up or down. Trying to find a path I never knew I'd be on. Asking the spirits and God to save me from my own insanity. Growth is painful and writing is my way of expression.
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
1st Oct 2024 3:32pm
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1st Oct 2024 3:35pm
Thank you so much. I'm trying to keep pushing,I do have so much to live for. Trying to heal and rediscover myself isn't easy. I'm trying to be the change nobody thought was possible (including myself). I hope all stays well for you mentally also.
Ill keep praying and never give up.
Ill keep praying and never give up.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
2nd Oct 2024 8:27pm
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5th Oct 2024 9:53pm
Thank you for the response. I'm trying to dig out and stay out of the depression.
12th Oct 2024 3:24am
12th Oct 2024 3:48am
Powerful write. Depression weighs heavy on the soul, at least in my experience. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
7th Jan 2025 2:44am
Don't waste your suffering.
Depression is dreadfully painful and debilitating but it is also an opportunity to listen to your soul speak.
Besides any biochemical issues, in my experience, depression was partially to blame on not facing the truth and or not getting my loves in the right order.
Don't turn your depression into a war zone unless you're prepared for total destruction and a long and costly rebuild.
Try and welcome it in as a wind blowing all the dust from your house.
🙏🙏🙏🙏
Depression is dreadfully painful and debilitating but it is also an opportunity to listen to your soul speak.
Besides any biochemical issues, in my experience, depression was partially to blame on not facing the truth and or not getting my loves in the right order.
Don't turn your depression into a war zone unless you're prepared for total destruction and a long and costly rebuild.
Try and welcome it in as a wind blowing all the dust from your house.
🙏🙏🙏🙏
7th Jan 2025 1:45pm
Thank you
I will keep this in mind as I navigate the unknown territory im currently in.
I will keep this in mind as I navigate the unknown territory im currently in.
