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Road Work Ahead
Knowing too much about what you can not change
Is bad for mental health and can drive one insane
So I stay in my lane; maintaining the road
Filling pot holes of pain that rain has erode
Is bad for mental health and can drive one insane
So I stay in my lane; maintaining the road
Filling pot holes of pain that rain has erode
Published 30th Sep 2024
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30th Sep 2024 2:23am
30th Sep 2024 2:25am
30th Sep 2024 4:12am
Very relatable story in the world of today for there is road work ahead of us 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2024 4:21pm
Great write....resonates with me....
I know the torments of mental issues
I know the torments of mental issues
14th Oct 2024 3:53am
Filling the holes or picking up the pieces, it's a lot of work ahead.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
20th Oct 2024 3:14pm
Fighting for change that you cannot make happen can drive a man insane.
Letting oneself be tossed about with out trying does even more dam
Letting oneself be tossed about with out trying does even more dam
1st Dec 2024 5:31am
4th Dec 2024 4:03am
Congrats on the win in '4 Lines Neatly Tied'. I particularly like your word play here and the flow. Look forward to reading what you got next.
6th Dec 2024 6:12am
