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Roam
Beneath the fractures and fissures of my heart's truth
Preserved in my earth are the fossils of you.
From the age when you roamed me.
To a blissful echo of groans and screams.
Do we ever truly understand
the hearts archeology?
Requires belief in things you cannot see.
Buried marrow deep inside of me.
From the age when you roamed free.
Now I roam an earth on fire with
red, orange & yellow trees.
Candy apple red, burgundy and blood that beats.
Lemon yellow, rust and tangerine.
My eyes with a secret gleam.
To know a part of you remains with me.
Preserved in my earth are the fossils of you.
From the age when you roamed me.
To a blissful echo of groans and screams.
Do we ever truly understand
the hearts archeology?
Requires belief in things you cannot see.
Buried marrow deep inside of me.
From the age when you roamed free.
Now I roam an earth on fire with
red, orange & yellow trees.
Candy apple red, burgundy and blood that beats.
Lemon yellow, rust and tangerine.
My eyes with a secret gleam.
To know a part of you remains with me.
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Re. Roam
29th Sep 2024 11:29pm
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29th Sep 2024 11:45pm
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29th Sep 2024 11:38pm
This poem kicks ass Debbie. Well said & very relatable. Great work & great visual.
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29th Sep 2024 11:44pm
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29th Sep 2024 11:43pm
Thank you so much. I'm honored to be on your reading list. 😊
Have a great night!
Have a great night!
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30th Sep 2024 2:00am
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30th Sep 2024 5:05am
The heart's archeology is a cool concept. And the color descriptions are wonderful.
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1st Oct 2024 1:58pm
This piece honestly left me speechless, to me it breathes melancholy.
"the fossils of you" > what a brilliant find. Amazing wording througout this whole write 💕
"the fossils of you" > what a brilliant find. Amazing wording througout this whole write 💕
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1st Oct 2024 3:37pm
Wow, you just made my day. It was thick with melancholy.
I knew I could make something out of - fossils of you
Thank you so much for nice comments.
I knew I could make something out of - fossils of you
Thank you so much for nice comments.
Re. Roam
2nd Oct 2024 2:46am
I am still thinking the depth of the second stanza. Placing myself in those world. Beautiful thoughts.
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2nd Oct 2024 7:22am
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2nd Oct 2024 2:07pm
This is absolutely wonderful, visceral .It pulls at one's heart strings. ❤️
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2nd Oct 2024 2:42pm