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Alcatraz
‘I am attached to you’,
you proclaim as though
this has always been
your desired destination.
Your limbs drape around
mine, still sweating, as I
steady my body, hoping
to hide my quiver, while
I plan what feels like
an impossible escape
from my mundane, yet
fated future.
you proclaim as though
this has always been
your desired destination.
Your limbs drape around
mine, still sweating, as I
steady my body, hoping
to hide my quiver, while
I plan what feels like
an impossible escape
from my mundane, yet
fated future.
Published 28th Sep 2024
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29th Sep 2024 3:16am
Dear U,
This write reminds me of all the times I would be in a situation where I wanted nothing more than to be anywhere but where I was with whoever I was with out of desperation. It wasn’t a lot of times but more than I’d care to admit.
That hemmed in feeling…ugh. You’ve put a beautiful poetic spin on it but the angst sure does come through. Terrific write. H🌷
This write reminds me of all the times I would be in a situation where I wanted nothing more than to be anywhere but where I was with whoever I was with out of desperation. It wasn’t a lot of times but more than I’d care to admit.
That hemmed in feeling…ugh. You’ve put a beautiful poetic spin on it but the angst sure does come through. Terrific write. H🌷
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