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Flash
Compressed narration
Words at haste
In a race
The next word chased
Is it such an immoral sin
My story is so wafer thin
What should I write?
A thriller, horror, something gory
A hero, good guy, steeped in glory
Something sinister, dark and black
Where the victim gets attacked
Something grand, pen in hand
A sentence short, not widely spanned
So there you have my short flash fiction
It's constricted, restricted, word eviction
A paragraph struggle, feuding friction
My eighty-eight word count micro addition
The End
Words at haste
In a race
The next word chased
Is it such an immoral sin
My story is so wafer thin
What should I write?
A thriller, horror, something gory
A hero, good guy, steeped in glory
Something sinister, dark and black
Where the victim gets attacked
Something grand, pen in hand
A sentence short, not widely spanned
So there you have my short flash fiction
It's constricted, restricted, word eviction
A paragraph struggle, feuding friction
My eighty-eight word count micro addition
The End
Author's Note
A prompt I received on the subject on flash fiction, short stories
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Flash
27th Sep 2024 12:13pm
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27th Sep 2024 12:49pm
Re. Flash
27th Sep 2024 1:35pm
Dear P,
I enjoyed the pace and meter of this is terrific. It matches the title with the energy of the subject. Quick and sharp. Well done. H🌷
I enjoyed the pace and meter of this is terrific. It matches the title with the energy of the subject. Quick and sharp. Well done. H🌷
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Re. Flash
27th Sep 2024 3:01pm
Re. Flash
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Re. Flash
28th Sep 2024 12:46pm
This is brilliant. The wording simply amazing.
88 words, I actually counted them, I'm crazy like that 😂
> Random fact: on my homepage it says my average words per poem is 88 :-)
88 words, I actually counted them, I'm crazy like that 😂
> Random fact: on my homepage it says my average words per poem is 88 :-)
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28th Sep 2024 6:41pm
Re. Flash
28th Sep 2024 4:09pm
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Re. Flash
28th Sep 2024 11:22pm
Pete! Pete! Mate... you know you're not gonna get very far with this flash fiction if you do not insert a page into that typewriter there, lol. Btw, I thought your short fiction was rather flash. 😉
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29th Sep 2024 1:10pm