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POP

there was something very scary.      
in that look.    
in those dilated pupils.    
in that drooling dead mouth.    
all, all, all open and receptive.    
In the background, someone said a linguistic gem.    
as if the music had stopped being heard.    
I found you strange and continued my way along the gallery walls.    
an endless stream of still lifes.  
Everything about that scene brought to mind paintings.  
by some unknown pop art artists.
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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Author's Note
Could you please poematize me?
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