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After El
After El,
I spent
Years
Desperately drunk,
Begging heaven
For just
A moment more.
It never came.
But my knock
Will never
Vacate
Heaven’s door.
I spent
Years
Desperately drunk,
Begging heaven
For just
A moment more.
It never came.
But my knock
Will never
Vacate
Heaven’s door.
Published 22nd Sep 2024
Author's Note
I tend to refer to her as El, the one person I thought I had. I have spent years struggling with alcohol; small victories and great defeats.
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22nd Sep 2024 9:16am
I can understand how terribly it hurts...but you should move on...
It won't bring good but will be a cause of your room...you got one life ....move on buddy ..I know it is very difficult but you should
Nice piece as always
It won't bring good but will be a cause of your room...you got one life ....move on buddy ..I know it is very difficult but you should
Nice piece as always
22nd Sep 2024 1:50pm
Thank you. I have for sure, but on rare nights I look back at my troubles with booze.
