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If You Want My Opinion
Look, Penelope. If you want my
opinion, I would say moving
yourself to the city of
Los Angeles is more
better than staying
here and letting
Dad give you
only
grief.
opinion, I would say moving
yourself to the city of
Los Angeles is more
better than staying
here and letting
Dad give you
only
grief.
Published 20th Sep 2024
Author's Note
This one nonet poem is from the point of view of a young woman telling a sibling why leaving home could be better than staying.
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