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Open dating, no not for me

Why did I react the way I did
You make me feel a way I never have before
It's like everything came to a skid
Even jealousy makes me want to roar
When all I want to do is lay on your chest
The rhythmic rise and fall, like calm tides
That's where I feel blesses
That's where all stress abides
I want love to exist
But all I've ever know
is what it should not consist
Like a sinking Stone
I don't know what to do
Because everyone I have ever asked for
It looks and sounds alot like you
And yet you are so much more
The way you look when you get excited
Like when you talk about DnD and rocks
It makes me so delighted
It makes time stop, every sing one of the clocks
I've never been a hopeless romantic
So I don't know where all of this is coming from
It makes me feel quite frantic
But I'm glad I'm no longer numb
I'll back off and not jump too quick
I want to learn more about you
I hope we still naturally click
I want to make sure our feelings are true
I hope you still want me too

JJoe :)
Written by Jammyjoe
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Author's Note
Spoiler: he did not want me too

Even tho I pick friendly comments I would appricate critique too. I just started writing this month
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