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Touched by Teardrops - with Lilliputian
Twilight's dark serenade
throbbing with hunger
grasping with fingers
my gothic violin
in melancholia
touched by the teardrops
with a falling of the resin
calling my name
sweet Stradivarius
playing soft melodies
to soothe music’s agony
beneath the night’s blanket
reflecting obsidian thoughts
throbbing with hunger
grasping with fingers
my gothic violin
in melancholia
touched by the teardrops
with a falling of the resin
calling my name
sweet Stradivarius
playing soft melodies
to soothe music’s agony
beneath the night’s blanket
reflecting obsidian thoughts
Published 15th Sep 2024
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15th Sep 2024 00:31am
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15th Sep 2024 00:33am
can you see the shape of the poem? wow.. whoever wrote this needs a raise!
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15th Sep 2024 1:22am
The poem especially in this shape makes us think of time with this hour glass shape. Tight
15th Sep 2024 1:24am
15th Sep 2024 4:41am
Wonderful job you, two. I love your collaborations together. Great read. Appreciate you, both.
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15th Sep 2024 4:42am
