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Love Cinquain
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Love Cinquain
Raindrops
Shining sun
Falling golden arrows
Cupid takes his aim
Enamored
Written by
PierreTheMad
Published
15th May 2012
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Re: Love Cinquain
MrAlptraum
(Mr A)
15th May 2012 5:07pm
When I first read it I thought: "Pierre's found love." Haha
Nice little image. I imagined the "falling golden arrows" to be the rain against the sun, not sure if that's how it was intended. Could just be my vivid imagination again. :)
Again, nice bit of visionary.
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re: Re: Love Cinquain
PierreTheMad
15th May 2012 5:21pm
Exactly right! Thanks for noticing that. And yeah if you see Starlight_Angel around, that's my little lady.
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Starlight_angel
15th May 2012 7:38pm
From the very moment I saw you...
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Soul_Man_Ken
6th Jul 2012 1:14am
Cintrain with strong heartspeak. I love this piece.
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re: Re: Love Cinquain
PierreTheMad
7th Aug 2012 1:02am
Thank you very much. (Sorry this tiny response took so long.)
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