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I asked
I asked for a kiss
She didn’t
Could have asked nicer
I couldn’t
She wasn’t interested
I wouldn’t
Thought our life was great
It isn’t
Should have done more
I hadn’t
Had to look for another
I shouldn’t
This is not my fault
It wasn’t
It all started when I asked
She didn’t
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Re. I asked
12th Sep 2024 10:10am
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12th Sep 2024 5:01pm
Re. I asked
12th Sep 2024 1:52pm
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12th Sep 2024 5:03pm
I guess my brain only works when I'm in pain... probably why I like BDSM... OMG you just made me realize this... see, I told you you are my philosopher and therapist
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13th Sep 2024 9:58am
Philosopher and therapist > I can go for that. You made me smile this morning :-)
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Re. I asked
12th Sep 2024 3:43pm
Truth to power. Life is filled with realities that give us new energy to keep on moving...maybe the next time or next one. Hugs and love, Oral
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12th Sep 2024 5:04pm
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12th Sep 2024 5:05pm
It started with a kiss... or lack of. I'm really sorry Sam to read that things are not working out for you. 😐
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Re: Re. I asked
12th Sep 2024 5:07pm
it usually starts with a kiss or a slap... when I get both thats when things start to work out...
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13th Sep 2024 4:42pm