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I Glanced At The Incoming Tide
While we were laying
naked on the beach, I glanced
at the incoming
tide and realized that I
truly can't live without you.
naked on the beach, I glanced
at the incoming
tide and realized that I
truly can't live without you.
Published 10th Sep 2024
Author's Note
This tanka poem is from the point of view of one guy who realized something about himself and a friend while staring at the ocean.
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