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Oceanic
Follow the movement of the water back and forth. The ocean kisses your feet, but you must remain aware and guard yourself from his love. Left to its own devices, his passion could kill you.
In all his magnificence, the ocean can not understand love. How can I love something that moves and is its own person even when I'm not looking? How can I love something that exists beyond me? Questions of this sort make him angry and confused. I must possess, he repeats to himself, I must possess.
Beware of the ocean, and love him from a distance. Watch his desire grow, but never try to quench it, never let...
Listen to me! Close your heart to the primal hypnotism of the waves.
Escúchame! Don't go willingly. Restrain your steps.
Listen...
In all his magnificence, the ocean can not understand love. How can I love something that moves and is its own person even when I'm not looking? How can I love something that exists beyond me? Questions of this sort make him angry and confused. I must possess, he repeats to himself, I must possess.
Beware of the ocean, and love him from a distance. Watch his desire grow, but never try to quench it, never let...
Listen to me! Close your heart to the primal hypnotism of the waves.
Escúchame! Don't go willingly. Restrain your steps.
Listen...
Published 15th May 2012
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22nd Jul 2014 5:02am
Felt the vapor n clinging to any space available... no commas before and, but or that. Your format imposes a need for strong gramtical process. still some good emotion n sentiment in the muddle... keep grindin
