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Twist A Soul
Thinking can be random sometimes
Not knowing what the brain has in mind
Of course mood does come into play
As well as the optic of what’s designed
Maybe just casually flirting with a thought
Or sinking deeper down the rabbit-hole
Might be smart to leave some breadcrumbs
Careful of the ones that will twist a soul
Not knowing what the brain has in mind
Of course mood does come into play
As well as the optic of what’s designed
Maybe just casually flirting with a thought
Or sinking deeper down the rabbit-hole
Might be smart to leave some breadcrumbs
Careful of the ones that will twist a soul
Author's Note
Random musing. Thinking can sometimes get deep and off putting, especially if your darker side is in the driver seat. I remind myself to always remain vigilant, some paths need not be traveled. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
"Don't disturb my paradise, I asked you once, I asked you nice".
- Sammy Hagar
- Damian DeadLove
"Don't disturb my paradise, I asked you once, I asked you nice".
- Sammy Hagar
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:26am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Shiloh. I'm glad you dig this one. It is safer to stay away from them for sure. Appreciate you.
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Re. Twist A Soul
1st Sep 2024 9:50am
Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:28am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Jimmy. I've been on both sides as well. The RL means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
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Re. Twist A Soul
1st Sep 2024 10:45am
I enjoyed reading this piece of how you weave your thoughts and insight and still, be able to convey your message of thought for it's true we gotta watch out for the twist a soul, for always remember that a wicked soul never means knowone any good, like a snake that sheds it's skin as a creature of habit 💪👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:30am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. I'm really glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 6:23am
Re. Twist A Soul
1st Sep 2024 2:31pm
Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:31am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Debbie. Really means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
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Re. Twist A Soul
1st Sep 2024 3:57pm
Never lose yourself in another person! I like the metaphor of this, particularly the breadcrumbs.
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:32am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Ahavati. I'm so glad you liked it. I thought the breadcrumbs was a cool touch. Appreciate you.
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Re. Twist A Soul
1st Sep 2024 7:28pm
waking up at the bottom of the rabbit hole covered in breadcrumbs isn’t always the best, but isn’t always the worse. I think….
enjoyed the thought process!
down2dirt
enjoyed the thought process!
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:34am
Thanks so much for the read and your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you.
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Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 2:56am
Very nicely done. Late night musings tend to take me on darkened path. Does not put me off. But can not stay there too long.😊
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Re: Re. Twist A Soul
2nd Sep 2024 3:07am
I totally get that. My musings often depend on what music I listen to that day. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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