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Final Moments

Please leave me alone
Let me die in solitude
I'll set myself free

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 30th Aug 2024

#dark #emotional #senryu #suffering #suicide

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deliabear (Debbie)

30th Aug 2024 7:20pm

Chilling. Very dark
I liked it a lot.

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Vision_of_insanity

30th Aug 2024 7:34pm

Appreciate that Debbie. Thanks you for the RL.

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LilDragonFly

30th Aug 2024 11:29pm

Resonates... it is the only freedom that is truly ours...

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Vision_of_insanity

30th Aug 2024 11:32pm

That's right. No one has the right to say you should or shouldn't do this or that to yourself.
Thanks for the read and RL.

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scatteredsilence

2nd Sep 2024 11:22pm

We are sovereign�. God given right to do to ourselves as we see fit.
Concise write

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Vision_of_insanity

2nd Sep 2024 11:30pm

Thank you!

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backdeckbenny

5th Nov 2024 5:44am

Ten out of ten.

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Vision_of_insanity

5th Nov 2024 10:38am

Thank you for reading & commenting.

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