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Final Moments

Please leave me alone
Let me die in solitude
I'll set myself free
Vision_of_insanity
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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deliabear LilDragonFly
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Re. Final Moments
(Debbie)
30th Aug 2024 7:20pm
Chilling. Very dark
I liked it a lot.
deliabear
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Re: Re. Final Moments
30th Aug 2024 7:34pm
Appreciate that Debbie. Thanks you for the RL.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Final Moments
30th Aug 2024 11:29pm
Resonates... it is the only freedom that is truly ours...
LilDragonFly
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30th Aug 2024 11:32pm
That's right. No one has the right to say you should or shouldn't do this or that to yourself.
Thanks for the read and RL.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Final Moments
2nd Sep 2024 11:22pm
We are sovereign…. God given right to do to ourselves as we see fit.
Concise write
scatteredsilence
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Re: Re. Final Moments
2nd Sep 2024 11:30pm
Thank you!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Final Moments
5th Nov 2024 5:44am
Ten out of ten.
backdeckbenny
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Re: Re. Final Moments
5th Nov 2024 10:38am
Thank you for reading & commenting.
Vision_of_insanity

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