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A Tragic Moment

Once I have seen you
I wish I never saw you
You ended my life

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 30th Aug 2024

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Re. A Tragic Moment

30th Aug 2024 11:29am

Make me think of Medusa...

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30th Aug 2024 11:30am

Good point. Thanks for the comment

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Re. A Tragic Moment

30th Aug 2024 11:43am

Looked fate in the eyes.
I liked this

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30th Aug 2024 11:44am

Thank you Debbie. Appreciated

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Re. A Tragic Moment

30th Aug 2024 2:43pm

WOW! Three powerful lines. Hugs and love, Oral

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30th Aug 2024 2:45pm

Thanks Oral. Much appreciated!

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