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She don't know me

My heart is for you
When I open up my eyes
I wish you were mine
Vision_of_insanity
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mysteriouslady
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Re. She don't know me
(Fia Naturie)
28th Aug 2024 1:27pm
This is such beautiful and heart felt poem. Lovely. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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28th Aug 2024 1:28pm
Appreciate that Fia. Thank you!!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. She don't know me
28th Aug 2024 2:21pm
If you're the first born son in your family or a strong warrior, id like to eat it :)
AfterSexDilemma
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28th Aug 2024 2:26pm
That's me
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. She don't know me
28th Aug 2024 2:27pm
Yay!
AfterSexDilemma
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Re. She don't know me
29th Aug 2024 3:50am
Short, sweet, and honest. Great write.<3
mysteriouslady
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29th Aug 2024 11:11am
Appreciate that. Thank you!!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. She don't know me
30th Aug 2024 9:14am
I really felt this poem. Great job!!
Si1kyPanther
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Re: Re. She don't know me
30th Aug 2024 10:43am
Thank you. I appreciate you reading & commenting.
Vision_of_insanity

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